I
enjoy reading a good mystery book, especially during the summer. That’s why I selected Cheryl Hollon’s newest
book Cracked to Death. This was the
first book I’ve read by this author and I had some mixed feelings about it.
On
the positive side, I liked the character Savannah Webb and her boyfriend Edward
Morris. Both characters seemed likable
and cared about others. I found the premise
of a mystery involving the art of glasswork interesting. A few of the characters had disabilities and
Savannah was quite caring towards them. Homicide
detective David Parker was interesting, but not fully developed.
What
I didn’t like: Some of the characters
(Rachel and Faith, SueAnn, Officer Boulli to name a few) seemed like
caricatures not real people. There were
a lot of politically correct, edgy things included in the book, to the point of
distraction. It took away from the
storyline. For example, when a homeless
person urinates on the side of an art studio, Edward suggests that America
needs to build more public toilets. I
don’t read mystery books to have PC views shoved in my face. There was one curse word but it was
unnecessary.
Previously
I mentioned that the story included characters with disabilities. The one I didn’t understand was Arthur who
had Crohn’s disease. He was not a major
character and he goes into a detailed explanation about the disease. Since his character was a minor part of the
story it wasn’t value added to the story.
I
thought it was interesting that the two overweight characters where portrayed
negatively. An emphasis was made on their
physical appearance and one is incompetent and the other is rather stupid.
One
of the most obnoxious characters was Amanda.
There is a reference to her sexting.
Thankfully the book didn’t go in to detail. But it was not a good or necessary part of
the story. I felt like it was thrown in
to be edgy. This character makes some ridiculous
choices and it gets tiring after a while.
Bad choice after bad choice and of course she’s “sorry”, weepy and didn’t
mean it. She felt like people where judging
her. Perhaps they were just astonished at
her bad nonsensical judgment.
I
didn’t care for Savannah “smiling down at these two absurd looking elders.” Really?
That was uncalled for.
Later
when Amanda is telling about her relationship with Martin, she is assured by Edward
and Savannah that her friends wouldn’t judge her. Perhaps instead, Amanda needed friends to lovingly
speak up when they see her exercising lack of wisdom and discernment.
Another
edgy reference: “You know how liberal
this community is. It’s not quite as
diverse as deliberately quirky Gulfport.”
Amanda
wasn’t the only person using poor judgment.
Savannah had her fair share of bad choices, most of which revolved
around her acting as a “consultant” for the police. There were times when she should have called
the police and given them information and not talked to a witnesses or suspects. This wasn’t very realistic.
All
this adds up to the story not being really believable. Many people and references seemed like they
were thrown in just to make the story edgy or politically correct. The character of Amada was irritating rather
than interesting. Savannah overstepping
her bounds as a consultant about glass seemed to go too far to be believable.
There
may have been a few errors in the book. Location
625 - screenedin should have been screened in. Location 1049 – references a third
bottle that was found that was an original Bristol blue bottle, like the first
one. A little later, in location 1111,
the third bottle is referenced again, “Jacob noticed was also a copy.” Location 1155: the word should have been “frequented”
instead of frequent.
All
in all, I found the story in Cracked to Death, by Cheryl Hollon, so-so. Some of the storyline and characters were not
believable or they were downright annoying.
At the same time, there were some characters that were likeable and the
setting in a glass art studio was interesting.
I
would like to thank NetGalley and Kensington Publishing Corp for the
opportunity to read Cracked to Death by Cheryl Hollon in exchange for an honest
review. I was under no obligation to
provide a favorable review.