I enjoy reading a good mystery book, especially during the summer. That’s why I selected Cheryl Hollon’s newest book Cracked to Death. This was the first book I’ve read by this author and I had some mixed feelings about it.
On the positive side, I liked the character Savannah Webb and her boyfriend Edward Morris. Both characters seemed likable and cared about others. I found the premise of a mystery involving the art of glasswork interesting. A few of the characters had disabilities and Savannah was quite caring towards them. Homicide detective David Parker was interesting, but not fully developed.
What I didn’t like: Some of the characters (Rachel and Faith, SueAnn, Officer Boulli to name a few) seemed like caricatures not real people. There were a lot of politically correct, edgy things included in the book, to the point of distraction. It took away from the storyline. For example, when a homeless person urinates on the side of an art studio, Edward suggests that America needs to build more public toilets. I don’t read mystery books to have PC views shoved in my face. There was one curse word but it was unnecessary.
Previously I mentioned that the story included characters with disabilities. The one I didn’t understand was Arthur who had Crohn’s disease. He was not a major character and he goes into a detailed explanation about the disease. Since his character was a minor part of the story it wasn’t value added to the story.
I thought it was interesting that the two overweight characters where portrayed negatively. An emphasis was made on their physical appearance and one is incompetent and the other is rather stupid.
One of the most obnoxious characters was Amanda. There is a reference to her sexting. Thankfully the book didn’t go in to detail. But it was not a good or necessary part of the story. I felt like it was thrown in to be edgy. This character makes some ridiculous choices and it gets tiring after a while. Bad choice after bad choice and of course she’s “sorry”, weepy and didn’t mean it. She felt like people where judging her. Perhaps they were just astonished at her bad nonsensical judgment.
I didn’t care for Savannah “smiling down at these two absurd looking elders.” Really? That was uncalled for.
Later when Amanda is telling about her relationship with Martin, she is assured by Edward and Savannah that her friends wouldn’t judge her. Perhaps instead, Amanda needed friends to lovingly speak up when they see her exercising lack of wisdom and discernment.
Another edgy reference: “You know how liberal this community is. It’s not quite as diverse as deliberately quirky Gulfport.”
Amanda wasn’t the only person using poor judgment. Savannah had her fair share of bad choices, most of which revolved around her acting as a “consultant” for the police. There were times when she should have called the police and given them information and not talked to a witnesses or suspects. This wasn’t very realistic.
All this adds up to the story not being really believable. Many people and references seemed like they were thrown in just to make the story edgy or politically correct. The character of Amada was irritating rather than interesting. Savannah overstepping her bounds as a consultant about glass seemed to go too far to be believable.
There may have been a few errors in the book. Location 625 - screenedin should have been screened in. Location 1049 – references a third bottle that was found that was an original Bristol blue bottle, like the first one. A little later, in location 1111, the third bottle is referenced again, “Jacob noticed was also a copy.” Location 1155: the word should have been “frequented” instead of frequent.
All in all, I found the story in Cracked to Death, by Cheryl Hollon, so-so. Some of the storyline and characters were not believable or they were downright annoying. At the same time, there were some characters that were likeable and the setting in a glass art studio was interesting.
I would like to thank NetGalley and Kensington Publishing Corp for the opportunity to read Cracked to Death by Cheryl Hollon in exchange for an honest review. I was under no obligation to provide a favorable review.